nalem
Pale Dog Studios.Entry #25
New cartoon! Fenada!
2/12/12 by nalem
Hey guys! It's been about a month since I was last here. I put up my newest cartoon, Fenada which is the beginning of something special. (so it'll be more than just this). It's an original story I wrote with spanio's help which is about Miguel, a lovestruck sap and the problems he brings to himself.
It's been on hold for a looong time due to college, work, computer troubles, my senior thesis, and all those kinds of fun life things. But now, with plenty of free time, a new computer on its way, and if all other things go right, there should be plenty more.
Thanks again to everyone who helped make this possible.
Until the next one, you can drop by Pale Dogand see both our newest comics and work.
I hope you enjoy yourselves!
-nalem
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2/13/12
My dear lady, molestation is not funny. :P XD
2/13/12
It wasn't bad, but at the same time, wasn't great. Next time, try using a joke that hasn't been done to death such as abortions on celebrities.
Haha, it's just character introduction. Common anime conventions go out the window after this.
2/13/12
You should add subtle music to your animations so there isn't any awkward silences. Otherwise is was pretty snazzy. :'D
2/13/12
Boco nailed it.
everything else felt pretty good, i love jagged frames of animation over the smooth keyed ones, the only thing that seems to irk me is that it went straight to a scene immediately with no build up. i do however like the fact it gets straight to the point, not a lot of that goin on lately.
2/13/12
it was pretty cool ^^
the only thing annoyed me was the overuse of the comedic anime sound effects :c
Yeah, I'm sorry about that. It was much too quiet, so I added them to give it more flare. There will be less in future episodes.
2/13/12
You make cool stuff :]
Thanks!